Dear Readers,Writers,Bloggers – Reviews Please!


Hi Everyone out there! I have a very kind request to make. Please don’t ignore it. I am literally on my knees as I type this. Let me introduce to you again, 2 parts of a story I have authored –

1. Save Me – I

2. Save Me – II

Kindly please, please review them from every angle possible. I would love to hear your comments and reviews and of course, for those who would like to give their opinion in private, you may also email me at 05.samir@gmail.com

I am desperate for reviews. It would be really hard for me to go ahead with my work on the later parts of the story if I’m not told where I’m wrong. I know I’m wrong but I’m not so good to know where I am. Please take out a minute or a few and oblige.

Thanks a million tons! πŸ˜€

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3 thoughts on “Dear Readers,Writers,Bloggers – Reviews Please!”

  1. I don’t know what you are looking for in a review but I will give you a few comments. I would begin by introducing the woman better. If her anonymity is important then keep it so, but why should we care about some random woman? What is her job? Where does she live? Why should we care? Just having brutal action doesn’t make a story interesting if we don’t care about the characters it is happening to. I don’t think it’s insensitive, but since the action happens so fast, we don’t have time to care. I hope this helps.

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