This one’s easy – it’s my wife!
I remember the restaurant
I remember the hue
I remember the dreamy silhouette that was you!
You appeared from the lights
And blew mine away.
All I saw was you
That smile in the fray.
We talked and talked
For hours and hours
Your career and mine
For an unsurpassable length of time.
Till we were caught dreaming
By our Dads screaming!
Lovely!
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Thank You Rajiv! 😀
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This was funny lol very nice !!!!!
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Thank You so much mesardonicmesarcastic! 😀
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Oh! A surprise ending 😀 Great poem 🙂
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Thank You Abhilasha! 😀
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Great poem,Samir.
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Thank You very much Ranu! 😀
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great 🙂 the end made me laugh
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That was the aim! 😀
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this is really really wonderful. and the photo angle and tone is a perfect match for the words. 🙂
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Hehehe… actually I use pics from the web that are reusable… so the pic is downloaded but it does show the mood doesn’t it 😀
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“Till we were caught dreaming
By our Dads screaming!”
Okay! Ya got me with the end!
Wonderful!
Thank you!
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Thank You Lance! 😀
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End was good.
Though you could have added an image of you both together
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I actually preferred not to! Not that I didn’t want to but it is piece of writing and adding a pic would have swayed the actual purpose of the words! 😀
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Ohh
Didn’t think of that
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Np! 🙂
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Haha they got ya ;D The poem is beautiful and simple. Hope you and your wife makes the best coupe ever 😉 After all the screaming, all is well that ends well 😉
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Thank You so much Lala! 😀
They were one anxious day and night 😀
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Brief but vivid.
Very nice.
Tell me, is the photo of the flower from your camera? It’s beautifully done.
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Thank you so much for your kind words 🙂
Oh no no… The pic is available free on web somewhere… I just used it!
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Wonderful!
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Thank You so much! 😀
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I like it.
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